our pitch

our pitch will be focusing on the split screen. we will be using a perfomance of the song on opne of the screens, we will probably use 3 screens in one shot, the other two screens will focus on the story, one of the screens may be used to focus on things such as parts of the peoples body, the story will be focusing on two people a boy and a girl who are looking for each other, the audience do not know much about them or why they are looking for each other but they know that they are looking for each other. the idea behind this is due to the lyrics, although we still haven't manager to get a copy or the lyrics yet we have started to listen to them and to read into them in a way that we want.

the first fews lines go like this: walking down miles of beach, rain attacks my eyes, looking for the tide,

we listened to this and thought that it meant something metaphorical such as the beach that he is on as being the wilderness or the loneliness that the person is in, the rain attacking his eyes is the the struggle that he faces and the things that are preventing him to get to what we wants and the tide is the thing that he wants to find. this is why we chose what we did becuase we thought that we could have that the two people that our in our story are people that are both on their beach, both alone, we want to emphasise this by the way that around them well be really busy street, or really busy suberbs that they are in lots of action going on around them, preferably it will be during rush hour that we do it so there are lots of cars lots of noise lots of everything, but in their heads there is nothing, and then the rain which in the song is the thing preventing him getting to what he wants will be lots of stuff in our song, we will have one character miss the train another one not being able to get out of wherever she is, there will be many obsticalls, we re not sure whether we will try and get rain during the song, ideally we would like it but we cannot rely on the rain as we are not sure if we could all the shots in knowing british weather.